====CORRECTIONS====
Sang Hyup: I love so much my family.
Correct: I love my family so much.
Explanation: We use the words "so much" or what we call "intensifiers" to emphasize our descriptions about our subjects we used it after we describe the subject in the sentence.

Sang Hyup: There are four members in my family; my father and mother and sister and me.
Correct: There are four members in my family: my father, mother, sister and me.
Explanation: Instead of using the conjunction "and", use the punctuation mark (,) comma to indicated that there are other entries as well as the (:) colon to indicate the following entries in your sentences.

Sang Hyup: It is bless for our family.
Correct: It is a blessing for our family.
Explanation: The actions is still continuous stating that your niece is a blessing for your family, so use the present participle form (-ing) for your verb.

Sang Hyup: I usually call to my family member and give a story that I experienced recently. Sometimes we go to the trip together to develop family relationship.
Correct: I usually call to my family members and give a story that I experienced recently.
Explanation: Do not forget to use the (-s) form nouns if it is plural or 2 or more.

                                    ===NOTES===
Hello Sang Hyup! Here are my reminders and suggestions for for essay. I just like what I said to you before always practice because you're doign great already!! Congratulations!! Thank you once again for submitting your homework and let's see each other tomorrow. Bye! Good Night and Take Care!
~Teacher Carrie