Hi Young! Thank you for submitting your homework early. I appreciate it a lot. Please see my corrections below because tomorrow I will be discussing the explanations.

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1. In fact

Young: Infact, i don't expect talkfun because the phone english used in ago didn't become big help. But the talk fun is really fun more than expect.

Correct: In fact, I didn't expect that TalkFun is good because English phone tutorial didn't become a big help to me, TalkFun is really fun more than I expected.

2. According to

Young: According to me, teacher berna is very kind and nice. It is good luck that she is my teacher.

Correct: According to me, Teacher Berna is very kind and nice. I am lucky that she is my Teacher.

3. Have something in common with someone

Young: She has somethign in common with me. Both have humor. So she accept well my joke.

Correct: She has something in common with me. Both of us have humor because she understands my joke well.

4. Give someone a hand

Young: And she give me a hand to not only english study but also feeling gets better.

Correct: She doesn't only gives me a hand to study English but also gives better feelings.

5. Take ages

Young: Sometime, i take ages when i finished english study, because i hard to say in english.

Correct: Sometimes, I takes ages to finish studying English because it is hard for me to speak in English.

6. Take care of someone or something

Young: But berna take care of me very well. so i am overcoming well.

Correct: Teacher Berna takes care of me very well that's why I am studying well.

7. Put something on

Young: I will make present and then put her pocket on when i go to the philipine.

Correct: I will bring present and put it on my pocket when I go to the Philippines.

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Job well done, Young! :)