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작성자 : CHA***   ·   2014-07-23

I like peaches.
It is sweet.It is delicious.

Ilike ice cream.
It is cool.It is delicious.

I like kimchi fried rice.
It made mom kimchi fried rice.

The end.^^

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Bella: Ilike ice cream.
Correct: I like ice cream.
Explanation: Please be careful with the spacing of every words.

Bella: It is sweet.It is delicious.
Correct: It is sweet and delicious.
Explanation: You can use the conjunction 'and' since you're just desribing one object or thing. Because this is a part of speech that connects two words, phrases, or clauses.

Bella: It is cool.It is delicious.
Correct: It is cool and delicious.
Explanation: The same with the second correction, you can use the conjunction 'and' since you're just desribing one object or thing. Because this is a part of speech that connects two words, phrases, or clauses.

Bella: I like kimchi fried rice.
Correct: I like kimchi and fried rice.
Explanation: You need to use the conjunction 'and' to connect grammatically coordinate words.

Bella: It made mom kimchi fried rice.
Correct: It was made by my mom.
Explanation: No need for you to state again the 'fried rice' and 'kimchi', since it's already stated on the first sentence. It will be redundant.


Hello Bella! Good job that you did your homework. Please study the corrections I've made. And keep up the good work, someday you'll be great! Very good!

Love,
Teacher Belle. :)

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