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작성자 : dh2***   ·   2014-07-22

Hellow I`m Fiona. Today class was fun. thank you~
I`m started about what I hate about amals.

I dont like fish, becuse the fish has a scale. Ifeel disgusthingan If
I touch the fish , Ican be gooseflesh. Also I doesn`t like brid . the reason same as the fish.

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Hello,  I`m Fiona.

Today's class was fun.  Thank you.  

I`m started thinking about what animals do I hate? 

don't like fish, because the fish has (a) scale.

I feel disgusted. Whenever I touch a fish , I get goose bumps.

Also I don't  like brid . 

The reason is same as the fish.


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Hi Fiona,

             I'm glad that you were able to submit your homework. Take note of the corrections I've made. Capitalization is important in writing. Proper word order is also important  so it would be easily understand. Just keep on practicing both your writing and speaking skills.

             See you in our next class. Bye. :)


T. Lea^*^

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