Hello Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please see my correction below.

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1.

Andrew: indicate I play soccer well.

Correct: I play soccer well.

2.

Andrew: I look up the sky

Correct: I look up the sky.

3.

Andrew: I object at insect

Correct: I don't like insects.

4.

Andrew: korea and u.s.a far away

Correct: Korea and USA are far away countries.   

5.
Andrew: mother praise me because i do test but perfect scoer

Correct: My mother praised me because I got a perfect score in our test.

6.

Andrew: I go sleep repeat

Correct: I always sleep.

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