Hi Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. I appreciate it a lot. Please see my corrections below.

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1.  Rotation

Andrew: earth's rotation causes day and night

Correct: Earth's rotation causes day and night.

2. Causes

Andrew: me and brother fight causes brother hit me

Correct: My brother hit me that's why it caused us to fight.

3. Daytime

Andrew: daytime i play soccer

Correct: I play soccer during daytime.

4. Nighttime

Andrew: nighttime i go sleep

Correct: I go to sleep during nighttime.

5. Repeat

Andrew: do my homework repeat

Correct: I repeat doing my homework.

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