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homework 5

작성자 : wwe***   ·   2014-07-21

I usually wake up at 9:00 a.m

But I always wake up at 6:00 a.m when I go to work.

I usually go to bed at 1:00 a.m

Because I go out to outside for playing the video game with friends.

I wondering why are you usually go to bed at a time late?

답변

Andrew: I usually wake up at 9:00 a.m
Correct: No correction.

Andrew: But I always wake up at 6:00 a.m when I go to work.
Correct: But I wake up at 6:00 a.m when I go to work.
Explanation: You can remove the word "always" since usually was used
ahead.

Andrew: I usually go to bed at 1:00 a.m.
Correct: No correction

Andrew:Because I go out to outside for playing the video game with friends.
Correct: Because I go out outside to play video games with my friends.
Explanation: You can omit "to". We say "to play video games" instead of "for playing the video game".

Andrew: I wondering why are you usually go to bed at a time late?
Correct: I wonder why you usually go to bed late?

Hello, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. Few corrections for today. We will find time to discuss them tomorrow. A job well done, Andrew! Keep it up.

-Teacher Isabel

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