Andrew: My birthday is 10 oct.
Correct: My birthday is on the 10th of October.
Explanation: The "th"(10th) and "article "the" should be included.

Andrew:When i had my birthday, i met my friends in restaurant.
Correct: When I had my birthday, I met my friends in the restaurant.
Explanation: Always capitalize the pronoun "I". The article "the" is used, especially before a noun.

Andrew: And then we ate delicious foods. example beef steak, fruit salad and ice-cream.
 Correct: And then we ate delicious foods like beef steak, fruit salad and ice cream.
Explanation: We can also say ''like" to enumerate things. We spell it as "ice cream" instead of ice-cream.

Andrew: And besides we had cutting cake time and drunk a beer.
Correct: We also had cake cutting time and drunk beers.
Explanation: We say cake cutting time instead of cutting cake time. Since we are referring to many, we could say "drunk beers".

Andrew: I like to drink a beer!!!
Correct: No correction.

Hello, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. Wow, you did a great job. Just take note of the simple corrections. Keep up the good work, Andrew!!

-Teacher Isabel