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작성자 : dwl***   ·   2014-07-16

amco town--->pyung-geo elementery school
1.Go straight to Nam-gang-ro 230m.
2.Go left on pyung-geo NH three cross road.
3.Go straight to Jinyang-ho 738m.
4.Go to right.
5.Go straight to Jinyang-ho-ro 51 street 149m.
6.Go to right.
7.Go straight to 9m.
8.pyung-geo elementery school.



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Corrections:

Eric:

amco town--->pyung-geo elementery school
1.Go straight to Nam-gang-ro 230m.
2.Go left on pyung-geo NH three cross road.
3.Go straight to Jinyang-ho 738m.
4.Go to right.
5.Go straight to Jinyang-ho-ro 51 street 149m.
6.Go to right.
7.Go straight to 9m.
8.pyung-geo elementery school.

Correct:

Amco town--->Pyung-geo Elementary School
1.Go straight to Nam-gang-ro 230m.
2.Turn left on Pyung-geo NH three cross road.
3.Go straight to Jinyang-ho 738m.
4.Turn right.
5.Go straight to Jinyang-ho-ro 51 street 149m.
6.Turn right.
7.Go straight to 9m.
8.Pyung-geo Elementary School.

Explanation:

1. Always CAPITALIZE the proper nouns that you use on your sentences.

Example: Japanese Embassy, Seoul University

2. The correct spelling of elementery is elementary.

3. It is better to use the term Turn instead of Go in telling whether to turn right or left.

Example: Turn right to Hanson Drive. Turn left to Roger Street.

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Hello Eric!

You were great in class today. You are getting better at telling directions. Here are just some reminders for you so that you can get better and better at it. I know you can do more next time. See you!

Teacher Ian

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