Hello, Olivia! Thank you for handing in your homework. You are now diligent doing it. Keep up the good work!

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My favorite subject is art because I like to draw. I am going to draw a landscape on summer vacation. I want to be an artist when I grow up.

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OLIVIA: my favorite subject is art.Because I like to draw.
CORRECT: My favorite subject is art because I like to draw.

EXPLANATION:

a. Capitalize the first letter of the sentence.

b. The word "because" is a connector of two sentences so we don't need to separate the two sentences.
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OLIVIA: I am going to draw a landsacpe at summer vacation .do.
CORRECT:  I am going to draw a landscape on summer vacation.

EXPLANATION:

a. Be careful with the spelling, Olivia! <Landscape>

b. Use the preposition "on" to  show the particular day when something will happen.
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OLIVIA: So I want to be a artist when I grow up.
CORRECT: I want to be an artist when I grow up.

EXPLANATION:

a. No need to put the adverb "so" in your sentence because it has a complete thought already.

b. Be careful with your determiner "a" and "an". We use "a" if the next noun starts with a consonant sound. <a cat> We use "an" if the next noun starts with a vowel sound. <an egg>

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Good job, Olivia! It's no wonder that art is your favorite subject. Teacher Ace is always impressed with kids who are good at drawing. Keep up the good work!