How to avoid and heal mosquito bites^^
Mosquito bites are itchy. They can also make people sick. To avoid these mosquitos and heal mosquito bites, we can do a lot of things. First, we can use a spray. Mosquitos hate the smell of spray that is made of tea tree oil. There are also some bracelets and necklaces, too. Second, we need to get away from standing water because there are many mosquitos found there. Lastly, we should stay away from the place where big mosquitos had been. Big mosquitos are able to lay eggs.
To heal the mosquito bites we have to be patient and do not scrach it. When you have a mosquito bite, it is very itchy because your skin is trying to fight the poison of mosquito. You also have to be careful when you are taking a medicine. Too much medicine is not good for your health. That is all. It is easy, but you have to be very patient.
Julie: And they can also make people sick.
Correct: They can also make people sick.
Explanation: The conjunction and is used to join two words or two parts of a sentence. If the sentence is independent, you can separate it from another independent sentence.
Julie: Mosquitos hate the smell of the smell of spray that is made by tea tree oil.
Correct: Mosquitos hate the smell of spray that is made of tea tree oil.
Explanation: You can use the word smell once in the sentence without changing the thought. Tea tree oil is not the one who makes the spray. It is an ingredient of the spray used for mosquitos. Therefore, it should be made of.
Julie: Last, we should stay away the place where big mosquitos had been.
Correct: Lastly, we should stay away from the place where big mosquitos had been.
Explanation: The preposition from is used to show the place where someone or something started.
Julie: And you also have to careful when you are having medicine.
Correct: You also have to be careful when you are taking a medicine.
Explanation: The appropriate word when you swallow medicine is
Hello Julie! Good job! Keep on making composition at home to practice your grammar and vocabulary skills.:)