Corrections:

Nicky: I went to the aquarium,and saw whale,shark,seahorse,and many animal. My best sea animal is seal.They were very interesting.

Correct: I went to the aquarium and saw whale, shark, seahorse, and many animals. My best sea animal is seal. They were very interesting.

Explanations:

1. When giving an enumeration, use spaces after commas.

Example: bread, butter, eggs, and fish

2. When pertaining to something more than one, add -s to the noun.

Example: dogs, cats, animals

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Hello Nicky!

Thank you for passing your homework. You did well. There are just some reminders here that I listed so that you can avoid doing the same mistake next time. Keep up the great job! See you!

Teacher Ian