I'm in the 4th grade and I am 11 years old. I am in South Korea. I have a pet parrot and his name is Crowny. I like to do sports like soccer, swimming, basketball and tennis. I want to be a diplomat.

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1.
Minsu:  I'm in the 4th grade and I am 11 years old.
Correct: I'm in the 4th grade and i am 11 years old.
Explanation:
*I is always in a capital letter.

2.
Minsu: I am in south korea.
Correct: I am in South Korea.
Explanation:
*Always write a specific name of a person, place, thing or animal in a capital letter.

3.
Minsu: I have a pet parrot and his name is crowny.
Correct: I have a pet parrot and his name is Crowny.
Explanation:
*Always write a specific name of a person, place, thing or animal in a capital letter.

4.
Minsu: I like to do sports like soccer, swimming, basketball and tennis.
Correct: No correction

5.
Minsu: I want to be a diplomant.
Correct:  I want to be a diplomat.
Explanation:
*diplomat - an official whose job is to represent one country in another, and who usually works in an embassy

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Hello, Minsu! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please read the following corrections and explanations carefully. If you have questions and clarifications, you can ask me in our class. Thank you!