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letter for Teacher Jane {h.w}

작성자 : lar***   ·   2014-07-13

to:Teacher Jane

Hello,Teacher Jane~!
I am your student,Arim.
I always like my class
because of you.
You are always smiling,
and like me.
So, that is why I like my class.
I have more things that
I like being on your class.
But,if I tell you all of them,
It will take hours and hours.
So,I just wrote three things
that I like being on your class.
And, have a nice day~!-(^0^)-

From:your student A Rim

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to:Teacher Jane

Hello,Teacher Jane~!
I amyour student,Arim.
I always like my class
because of you.
Youare always smiling,
and like me.


Correct: You arealways smiling like me.


So, that is why I like my class.
I havemore things that
I like being on your class.

Correct: I still havemany reasons why I like your class,


But,if I tell you all of them,
It willtake hours and hours.

Correct: It will takemore than an hour.


So,I just wrote three things
that I like beingon your class.
And, have a nice day~!-(^0^)-

From:yourstudent A Rim




Good Afternoon Arim!


I'm so happy because you were able to passed yourhomework. Well it seems I wasn't able to see you for more than amonth. I'm excited to see you later on our class and you owe me a lotthings. I can't wait to talk to you and see your smile. Please reviewand study my corrections. Thank you! See you in a while.Bye



Teacher Jane^^

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