I have a treasure box inside my cozy house. My first lovely treasure is a heart locker. Because, I got the heart locker on my birthday from my best friend. My second lovely treasure is my electric fan which is a special fan for me. Because my mum's friend's son gave it to me when we had dinner with my family. My third lovely treasure is teacher Jasmine. Because she teaches me and she laughs when I do jokes. She is kind and beautiful like a pink wonderful flower. My last lovely treasure is my family. Because God gave my family. Sometimes I fight with my sister but I thank God for my wonderful, great and funny family members.

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Gloria: Because my mum's friends's son
Correct: Because my mum's friend's son
Explanation: Please study the use of pronouns. Possessive nouns are used to indicate ownership.

Gloria:  teacher. Jasmine.
Correct: teacher Jasmine.
Explanation: It is better to say it this way. Remove the period because you are indicating the persons' profession.

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Hello Gloria!

Thank you for doing this homework.
Wow so many lovely treasures. Thank you for including me as one of your treasures. May God bless you abundantly in knowledge in goodness :)

See you later

Teacher Jasmine