Yesterday, I have started to play Violin. When I started violin I  felt great so I jumped and jumped. I really wanted to learn it. When I went to my piano class, my teacher was waiting for me. Ah 2:00o'clock I learnt how to make a soft sound by using a stick, by rubbing the string of the violin. When it was about 3:00o'clock, I learnt a song. Called 'little star'. It was hard at first but when I keep on playing the music it was getting easier and easier. I was tired but I did not give up. The reason why I didn't gave up was that later on, I want to worship God with violin. No matter what stops me. I will always worship God forever.

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Gloria: Yesterday. I have started Violin.
Correct: Yesterday, I have started to play Violin.
Explanation: It is better to say it this way. To complete your sentence it is better to use a proper verb that indicates what did you do in the violin.

Gloria: by rubbing the string of violin.
Correct: by rubbing the string of the violin.
Explanation: Please study the use of definite article [the] -  Used to indicate a noun that is definite or has been previously specified in the context.

Gloria: No matter what stopes me
Correct:  No matter what stops me.
Explanation: Please be careful of the spelling and always put a period after your sentence.

Hello Gloria :)

Thank you for sending this homework.
Wow! It seems that your day was really filled with very exciting activities yesterday. Good job! Yes Nothing can stop you from worshiping God. God bless you and your studies. See you later

Lots of love,
Teacher Jasmine