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작성자 : hee***   ·   2014-07-10

I'm sorry to send my homework too late.

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<Things I do on weekeds>

1.I do my homework.
2.I go to church.
3.I play video game with my fother.
4.I watch movie with my family
5.I take a rest in my house reading books.

<Things my friend dose on weekends>

1.He dose his homework.
2.He plays soccer with his friend.
3.He watches on TV.
4.He reads books.
5.He rides a bikes.

답변

Wow! My cute David. I'm happy to see your homework for the very first time. Thank you for submitting it. "Better late than never!" ^^

Here are the corrections...

    *******CORRECTED SENTENCES OF DAVID WON********

<Things I do on weekends>

1. I do my homework.
2. I go to church.
3. I play video game with my father.
4. I watch movie with my family
5. I take a rest in my house while reading books.

<Things my friend does on weekends>

1. He does his homework.
2. He plays soccer with his friend.
3. He watches on TV.
4. He reads books.
5. He rides a bike.

    *******************************************************

DAVID: He rides a bikes.
CORRECT: He rides a bike.

EXPLANATION: Always remember, David, "a" means "one" so if you say "a bike" it means "one bike" <no -s> ^^

    *******************************************************

Good job, David! Just be careful with your spelling. I suggest that you should read your composition again before sending it to Teacher so that you will have a PERFECT one! I know you can do it!

I'm excited to see your Lego toy on Tuesday. I'm even excited to see your cute face! See you, David!

Love,

Teacher Ace ~

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