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My younger brother

작성자 : bea***   ·   2014-07-10

I have my younger brother.And he is 2 years old. He can speak 'mama','papa','banana', 'sister' and 'strawberry'. He is very cute so I always want to play with him. His favorite fruit is banana and his favorite people is me, Zenia.I LOVE my younger brother.^^~

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I have my younger brother.And he is 2 years old. He can speak mama, papa, banana, sister and strawberry. He is very cute, so I always want to play with him. His favorite fruit is banana and his favorite person is me, Zenia. I LOVE my younger brother.^^~

Zenia: He can speak 'mama','papa','banana', 'sister' and 'strawberry'.
Correct: He can speak mama, papa, banana, sister and strawberry.
Explanation: No need to put apostrophe (') when talking about specific words. Apostrophe can be used when emphasizing possession or when you want to shorten the noun or pronoun from the linking verb, for example: that is = that's, it is = it's and etc.

Zenia: His favorite fruit is banana and his favorite people is me, Zenia.
Correct:  His favorite fruit is banana and his favorite person is me, Zenia.
Explanation: When talking about 1 person, just use teh word "person". If it's more 1 person, use "people".

** Thank you, Zenia, for doing your homework. I really apreciate it. I can see that you really your younger brother. He's really cute. Well, just check the corrections I had made. Keep up the good work and enjoy your weekend. See you next Tuesday.


~ Teacher Rachelle  ~

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