Hello, Young! Thank for submitting your homework on time. Here are your corrections. Please take a look on this tomorrow because I will put further explanations on your every grammar mistakes.

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1. Grow up

Young: kid's body grow up almost17years. but they are mind still yet! Althought they seem like growup, Adults treat be carefull for them, Because their mind is easilybroken.

Correct: Children's body grow up until seventeen years old but their mind don't. Although they might seem like they have grown up, adults should treat them carefully because they could get hurt easily.

2. Be used to (something)

Young: I have been the science teacherfor 5years in Academy. So I am used to lying of the students.Forexmple, they said i can't go to the class because i'm so sicktoday! Then, i ask question to student. Is the parents in the home??If they answer to be no in the home, almost 90% lie.

Correct: I have been a Science Teacherfor five years that's why I am used to the little white lies of thestudents.

3. Pick up

Young: My son is 4years old. Sometimes,he pick it up something and put in a mouth. So i always be carefully.

Correct: I always watch for my fouryear old son because he sometimes picks up something and puts it inhis mouth.

4. Give back

Young: 1 year later, i lend money to my friend. Myfriend said i give back 3 month afters. But he is still not give backmoney.

Correct: My friend has not given back yet the moneythat I lent him one year ago.

5. Be sick

Young: I got rained much yesterday. i coughed thismorning and now be very sick!

Correct: I am sick because I got wet bythe rain yesterday.

6. Give away

Young: I give money away to africaorphan once in a month. It is even if small money butI hope that itbecome the big help

Correct: I hope that the money I amgiving money away to African orphans would be a big help to them.

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