Corrections:

1.My favorite fruit it apple.

I like because it is delicious.

I eat it sun.

Correct:

My favorite fruit is apple. I like it because it is delicious. I eat it on Sundays.

Explanation: We use the linking verb is instead of it in the sentence. We also use the preposition on to tell a specific time and we capitalize Sunday.

2.My favorite fruit it banana.

I like because it is delicious.

I eat it monday.

Correct: My favorite fruit is banana. I like it because it is delicious. I eat it on Mondays.

Explanation: We use the linking verb is instead of it in the sentence. We also use the preposition on to tell a specific time and we capitalize Monday.

3.My favorite fruit it peach.

I like because it is delicious.

I eat it friday.

Correct: My favorite fruit is peach. I like it because it is delicious. I eat it on Fridays.

Explanation: We use the linking verb is instead of it in the sentence. We also use the preposition on to tell a specific time and we capitalize Friday.
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Good bye! Teacher Ian~^^

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Hello Sydney!

Thank you for sharing with me the fruits that you like. You are really getting better in expressing yourself. Keep that up! Here are some corrections that I made for your homework. Practice them so that next time you can apply them in future writings that you will still do. See you!

Teacher Ian