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to the dentist
작성자 : 101*** · 2014-07-04
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Hello, Olivia! Wow, at last I can see your homework now on my page. ^^ Keep it up! Here are the corrections...
*********CORRECTED ESSAY OF OLIVIA PARK***************
I went to the dentist to have teeth extraction. When my teeth was took off,it didn't hurt so I didn't cry. I touched my gums with missing the teeth with my tongue.
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1.
OLIVIA: I went to the dentist to take off my teeth.
CORRECT: I went to the dentist to have teeth extraction.
EXPLANATION: It is better to say that you will have a teeth extraction than totake off your teeth. Teeth extraction is the process of pulling off some teeth by the dentist.
2.
OLIVIA: when I took off my teeth,it didn,t hurt.so I didn,t cry.
CORRECT: When my teeth was took off,it didn't hurt so I didn't cry.
EXPLANATION:
3.
OLIVIA: i touched my blanked teeth with my tongue.
CORRECT: I touched my gums with missing the teeth with my tongue.
EXPLANATION:
a. Again, let's capitalize the first letter of the sentence. And the word I is always in capital letter.
b. The one that you actually touch by your tongue is your gums. ^^
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Keep up the good work, Olivia! See you again in the class and let's get rid of the "I am dogs of dogs." Kkkkk!