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작성자 : dh2***   ·   2014-07-03

1. I turn off the raideo ,because when I turn on the raideo my brother saied so~ noizy so, I turn off the raideo.

2.He turn on the computer ,he will do comeputer game.

3.my father speed up the car ,because he was late.

4.I steaming about scarre movie

답변

1. I turn off the radio ,because when I turn on the radio my brother will say so~ noisy. So, I turn off the radio.

2. He turn on the computer ,he will do computer game.

3. My father speed up the car ,because he was late.

4. I got steaming about scary movie
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Fiona: 1. I turn off the raideo ,because when I turn on the raideo my brother saied so~ noizy so, I turn off the raideo.
Correct: 1. I turn off the radio ,because when I turn on the radio my brother will say so~ noisy. So, I turn off the radio.
Explanation: Please be careful of spellings and study future tenses. will

Fiona: 2.He turn on the computer ,he will do comeputer game.
Correct: 2. He turn on the computer ,he will do computer game.
Explanation: Always put a space after a number. Be careful of spelling.

Fiona: 4.I steaming about scarre movie
Correct: 4. I got steaming about scary movie
Explanation: It is better to say it this way.
"be Steaming" is an idiomatic expression which means to be very angry.

Hi Fiona :)
Thank you so much for doing this homework very fast.
See you on Monday and have a great weekend.

Teacher Jasmine

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