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작성자 : dh2***   ·   2014-07-03

1.I fed up of my friend , because when she got good socre ,she saied I`m so sad so,I fedup of my friend

2. I stay get along in my house

3.I cheer up of my mother.

답변

1. I'm fed up with my friend. Because, when she got good score ,she said  " I'm so sad".

2. I stay in my house to get along with my family.

3. My mother cheer me up.
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Fiona: 1.I fed up of my friend , because when she got good socre ,she saied I`m so sad so,I fedup of my friend
Correct: 1. I'm fed up with my friend. Because, when she got good score ,she said  " I'm so sad".
Explanation: always put a space after a number. Please study the use of preposition with and be careful when it comes to spelling.

Fiona: I stay get along in my house
Correct: I stay in my house to get along with my family.
Explanation:
It is better to say it this way when we say get along that means You have a good relationship with someone.

Fiona: 3.I cheer up of my mother.
Correct: My mother cheer me up.
Explanation:
I rephrase the sentence so it would be understandable.

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Hello Fiona ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework
Please be reminded with my corrections. Thank you for telling me the reason why you were fed up last school test.
See you again on Tuesday and I hope you will have a happy weekend. Take care always.

Love,
Teacher Jasmine

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