Mary: Last saturday I watched movie called twlight it was little bit scary.

Correct: Last Saturday, I watched a movie called entitled Twilight. It was a little bit scary.

Explanation: The word "called" means to describe someone or something in a particular way, while the word "entitled" means to give a particular title or name. For example: What was the book entitled?

Mary: The characterr was called Bella and Edward.When I finish watching the movie I played at outside with my sister.

Correct: The characters  was called name are Bella and Edward. When I finished watching the movie, I played at outside with my sister.

Explanation: When the time period has finished we must use the past tense of the verb. For example: finished, watched, played, brought, caught, ran etc.

Mary: And last Sumday I also played at outside with my sister.It was veryn fun.I played slide and swing I also run.

Correct: And last Sunday, I also played again at outside with my sister. It was very fun. I played on the slide and swing, and I also run ran. After that, I ate dinner with my family I and went to bed.

Explanation: Use a comma after certain words that introduce a sentence, such as well, yes, why, hello, hey, last Saturday, etc.

>>Please be more cautious when it comes to spelling.

**Hi, Mary~! Thank you for submitting your assignment early. I really appreciate it. Anyway, it appears that you extremely enjoyed your weekend. I hope you'll have a great time for the upcoming days, too. Thank you so much for being an awesome student. Keep it up. Fighting! :) :) :) Love, Teacher Monica ?¡§??¡§??¡§?