soccor is one of the exercise.

Correct: soccer isone of the common sports in Korea.

It has 1 goalkeeper. And, the best soccorplayer of the Korea,

is Park Gi Sang.

Correct: the bestsoccer player in Korea is Park Gi Sang.

Soccor is very,very fun game. But it is lliitlehard.

Correct: Soccer is avery fun game but little hard to play.

But, tou can just learn about soccor, andthink about soccor.

correct: But, I think you can learn on how to play thesoccer.

If you do that very much, you canplay soccorvery well.

Correct: soccer(Spelling)

Good evening Arim!

Thank you for doing your homework. I want you to checkmy corrections most specially your spelling. I know you could improvemore. Just ask your teacher if you have some questions and I am hereto guide and help you. See you later. Have a great night.

Teacher Jane ^^