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작성자 : gre*** · 2014-06-30
Vehicle : machine what we use for riding.
Korea has many safe vehicles. One of them are boats. We use it to go Dokdo, the island which is belongs to Korea. NOT JAPANES!
Endangered : Frightened by danger.
Polarbears are endangered, because the ice in the North pole are melted.
Buckle up : Put seatbelt on.
(At the kingdergarten) Attention little chicks~! Buckle up.
Korea has many safe vehicles. One of them are boats. We use it to go Dokdo, the island which is belongs to Korea. NOT JAPANES!
Endangered : Frightened by danger.
Polarbears are endangered, because the ice in the North pole are melted.
Buckle up : Put seatbelt on.
(At the kingdergarten) Attention little chicks~! Buckle up.
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Vehicle : It is a machine what we use for riding.
Korea has many safe vehicles. One of them are boats. We use it to go to Dokdo, the island which belongs to Korea. NOT JAPAN!
Endangered : Frightened by danger.
Polarbears are endangered, because the ice in the North pole are already melting.
Buckle up : Put seatbelt on.
(At the kindergarten) Attention little chicks~! Buckle up.
Thank you for submitting your work on time Great! I just made some few corrections just check it. Keep it up! I'll see you again on Wednesday! :)
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