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작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-06-28

tourist > A lot of tourist came to Seol on their vacation.
variety > My friends always say that there are variety toys in my house.
isolated > Teachers teach not to go to isolated places.
vibrant > In L.A there are many vibrant things we can do.
destination > America is the destination I want to go.
vary > In the answer sheet it said “the answer can be vary.”

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tourist > A lot of tourist came to Seoul on their vacation.
variety > My friends always say that there are variety toys in my house.
isolated > Teachers teach not to go to isolated places.
vibrant > In L.A., there are many vibrant things that we can do.
destination > America is the destination that I want to go.
vary > In the answer sheet, it says ??¡Æthe answer can vary.??¡¾

Julie: In L.A there are many vibrant things we can do.
Correct: In L.A., there are many vibrant things that we can do.
Explanation: Use a comma before and after certain introductory words or terms. That introduces what is called an essential clause. Essential clauses add information that is vital to the point of the sentence.

Julie: America is the destination I want to go.
Correct: America is the destination that I want to go.
Explanation: That introduces what is called an essential clause. Essential clauses add information that is vital to the point of the sentence.

Julie: In the answer sheet it said "the answer can be vary."
Correct: In the answer sheet, it says "the answer can vary."
Explanation: Use a comma before and after certain introductory words or terms. The sentence is in active voice. In the active voice, the object receives the action of the verb.

Hi Julie! Keep up the great job! Just take note of the punctuation marks and the pronoun that in sentences.

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