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Do yun's homework

작성자 : tgv***   ·   2014-06-26

1. Today is special day.
2. I like discount.
3. I spend money.
4. I learned about free coupon.
5. I have extra money.

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????????????????????????????????? ===CORRECTIONS===
Do Yuon: Today is special day.
Correct: Today is a special day.


Do Yuon: I have extra money.
Correct: I have an extra money.
Explanation: Do not forget to use articles (a, an, the) in your sentences becasue it emphasizes the idea that is being talked about.


Do Yuon: I like discount.
Correct: I like discounts.
Explanation: This word should be on its plural form to signify about "having a lot of discounts".


Do Yuon: I spend money.
Correct: I like or love to spend money.
Explanation: Try to use helping verbs (like or love)?in your sentences to give emphasize on the main verb.

?????????????????????????????????????? ===NOTES===
Hello Do Yuon! Thank you for submitting your homework early :) You did a good job on expressing your ideas but we also have to work on widening your vocabularies so that when you construct your sentences you can also lenghten it and have essential words to express. I'll see you on Tuesday! Have a happy weekend! Bye :) Take care.
~Teacher Carrie ^^

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