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작성자 : gre***   ·   2014-06-25

I want to be a scientist.
But not a unskilled scientist.
I would like to be a better than Instein.
Plus I want to sucess with less failure!

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 I want to be a scientist.
But not an unskilled scientist.
I want  to be better than Einstein.
And also, I want to be successful with less failure!


Wow! You are really improving, Keep it up! I just made some few corrections, kindly check it. Thank you for submitting your homework on time. :)


Love,

Teacher Veronica :)

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