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작성자 : gyd***   ·   2014-06-25

school rules

Not run in the corridor
Not to fight
Do well presented
Organize notebooks do well
Not not play with

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School Rules

Esther: Not run in the corridor

Correct: Do not run in the corridor.

Esther: Not to fight.

Correct: Do not fight with other students.
 

Esther: Do well presented.

Correct: Do well when doing a presentation.


Esther:Organize notebooks do well.

Correct: Organize your things such as notebooks, books and other school supplies.
 

Esther: Not not play with.

Correct: Do not play while the class is on going. 


Hi, Esther! I'm glad that you were able to submit your homework. I would like you to always remember that completing the sentences using articles, determiners and verb tenses are very important to make your sentence more precise. However, I'm happy because your are able to deliver your thoughts about this homework. One more thing please submit your homework 1 day or 1 hour before our class so that teacher can correct it immediately ok^^. Thank you and let's learn more in our lessons! :) 

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