I have my room. I have my own bed, desk, chairs, books and shelves in my room.
Also My mom and dad hanged the curtains in last winter.I love them(*^^*)
I also have my own board.It is made of the tree wood, so it is pretty. I stuck the my calendar, homework sheet, Braonie doll (small one) and so on and so forth on the board.
I think my room is beautiful, wonderful and great!!!

Zenia: I have my room. I have my own bad, desk, chairs, books and shelfs in my room.
Also my mom and dad hanged the curtain in winter.I love them(*^^*)
Correct: I have my room. I have my own bed, desk, chairs, books and shelves in my room.
Also My mom and dad hanged the curtains in last winter.I love them(*^^*)
Explanation: Please be careful with the spelling of the words. The plural of shelf is shelves and it's the irregular plural form of a noun. When using the pronoun "them", see to it that the subject is in plural form. The sentence will be more understandable if it's simple but with correct grammar and spelling.

Zenia: I also have my own board.It is made of the tree, so it is pretty. I stuck the calander, homeworksheet, Braonie doll(small one) and so on on the board.
Correct: I also have my own board.It is made of the tree wood, so it is pretty. I stuck the my calendar, homework sheet, Braonie doll (small one) and so on and so forth on the board.
Explanation: Since the material came from the tree, it should have been wood. Homework sheet is two words not one word. When there a lot of things to say but you don't want to say it, it's so on and so forth.

** Thank you, Zenia, for the homework. I can imagine that your room is full of decorations. I can feel that you really love your room. Thank you for sharing these things to me. I'll see you on Thursday again. Take care always!

~ Teacher Rachelle  ~