==Corrections==
Daniel: Our life will be very uncomfortable.No fans,heaters will be a total disaster.
Correct: Our life will be very uncomfortable.No fans
and heaters
that will be a total disaster.
Explanation: Take note of using conjunctions or word connectors because this will indicate connections on your words as well as pause while reading the sentence.
Daniel:
uncomforatable Correct:
uncomfortableExplanation: Be careful with your spelling.
==NOTES==
Hello Daniel! Thank you for submitting your homework and I still do really appreciate your effort. A job well done on expressing your ideas! Keep it up! See you. Take care. :)
~Teacher Carrie