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작성자 : jun*** · 2014-06-15
Anyway, I met 2 friends of our college on Saturday night. One of them has one son already. I really adore him especially, so I held the baby in the café and he played with a straw and a cup of Juice. Finally, he poured the juice and his mother was angry. What was the funniest thing is when he feel the atmosphere is serious, he read his countenance and his eyes turned to be pity.
It was very treated(or healed) time from my tired weekdays.
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When I woke up last Saturday, it was already 3 o?clock in the afternoon because last Thursday night, after my TalkFun class, my cousins came to my house and we talked until dawn. I went to sleep at past 3 AM.
Anyway, I met up with my 2 college friends last Saturday night. One of them has a son already. I really adored him so I carried the baby in the caf? as he played with a straw and a cup of juice. Suddenly, he poured the juice and his mother got angry. The funny thing was when he felt the serious atmosphere, he gave us a pity-eyed look. It was such a relief to have that time after a tiring week.
Hello, Veronica!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
Please check the corrections I have made. Some sentences are changed to make it better but some are just verb tenses error.
Don't worry, you will get used to the English language.
See you in class!
Melody~