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작성자 : gab***   ·   2014-06-10

dad born 1971 January 11th.
mom born 1974 December 12nd.
me born 2003 September 23th.
little sister born 2005 December 13th.

I have a cold.

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       ===========CORRECTED SENTENCES===========


My dad was born in 1971 on January 11th.
My mom was born in 1974 on December 12nd.
I was
born in 2003 on September 23th.
My little sister was born in 2005 on December 13th.

I have a cold.

               ===========REMINDERS===========

 * We use possessive adjectives to show who owns or "possesses" something. The possessive adjectives are: my, your, his, her, its, our, their. Learn how to use them correctly in your sentences. These are adjectives. Don't confuse them with pronouns!

 * Try to use verbs in your sentences because that is the common format for sentences. Keep studying about the tenses of the verb. Always be cautious when you are using them in your sentences. Start with the basic tenses and move on with the complex ones (continuous, passive, progressive, etc.)

* Try to study about Prepositions because even though they might consist of a few letters, they are still important. They act as glue to the words in our sentences and they make the idea clearer. Use IN before a year and ON on a specific date.

 

                        ===========NOTE===========

 

Hi, Gabe! Thank you for submitting this homework. You worked hard to construct sentences and use the lesson we have learned in the past. I want you to study more and polish your skills so that next time, you will not do the same errors as before. I believe in you, Gabe! Keep it up! Take note of the different reminders I have listed for you! Thank you~

- T. Rose

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