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Sang Hyup: Friends don't exist for arguments. In my cases, my friends like to enjoy hobbies such as riding a bycycle. Although sometimes we need a argument for a assignment or group project, It's not for win but for a win-win proposal.
Correct: Friends don't exist for arguments. In my case, my friends like to enjoy hobbies such as riding a bicycle. Although sometimes we?had an argument?on an assignment or group project, so we try to talk and solve the problem together properly.
Explanation: Take note of the singular form "case" because it should be "In my case" for it is just pertaining to only one. Then the spelling of the word "bicycle" and as well as the choice of words on your paragrapg. Try to make it simple in order not to make any confusions about the idea.

*Sang Hyup about number 9 this expression means that enemies have their own way to tell truth to you because they can see some of your flaws of imperfections. They can say negative things to you that sometimes can help you to improve and develop into a good one. While sometimes, our freinds just only say good things to us because they do not want us to get hurt if they're going to try to say negative things about us. So, in a sense Sang Hyup sometimes enemies are more honest than our friends. :)

Sang Hyup:Yes that's right. People don't like the person who always talks only about oneself. People sometimes need to know listen to others' opinion. Listening to others makes people more close to each other.
Correct: Yes that's right. People don't like the person who always talks only about?themselves. People sometimes need to know and listen to others' opinion. Listening to others makes people get closer to each other.
Explanation: We are pertaining to the possessive case of nouns so, we should use "themselves" instead of "oneself", then do not forget to use conjunctions "and" because these words enable to relate words with each other and the last one is the comparative degree of the word "close" is "closer" so try to take note using these words to make your sentences accurate.

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Hello Sang Hyup! Thank you for submitting your homework as early as possible. And I would like to congratulate you as well because I can already see your improvements on expresing your ideas well on our discussion. Keep it up! I'll see you tomorrow. Bye! Take care.

Teacher Carrie