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Played with yon gi,

작성자 : joj***   ·   2014-06-09

Today I draw a picture with yon gi.We draw a flower and leaf.And we made a flag.The flag was beautiful when it was finshed.I love the flag and I think yon gi could keep this flag.

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Today I drew a picture with Yon Gi. We drew a flower and leaf. And we made a flag. The flag was beautiful when it was finished. I love the flag and I think Yon Gi could keep this flag.


Wanda: Today I draw a picture with yon gi.
Correct: Today I drew a picture with Yon Gi.
Explanation: drew is the past tense of draw.


Wanda: The flag was beautiful when it was finshed.
Correct: The flag was beautiful when it was finished.   
Explanation: Please be careful when it comes to spelling. ^^

Wanda: I think yon gi could keep this flag.
Correct: I think Yon Gi could keep this flag.
Explanation: always remember that when it comes to name of a person, country, title, month it should be capitalize.


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Hi wanda!
Thank you for sending your homework.
Please be mindful of my corrections ^^ see you on Wednesday


Teacher Jasmine ^^

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