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My goals and plans

작성자 : khy***   ·   2014-06-04

My goal is the police. Then, I decide to study hard and learn about the police. How? I will ask police's detailed work to my parents having police's job.
I think that the police must know well about society. Why? Beacaus the police's work is what solve the problems happening to society. I would like to achieve my dream.

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           My goal is to be a policewoman someday, that is why I want to learn all the things about being a police. But how? Maybe I just need to ask my parents because they are both police.
I think if you really want to be a police you should be knowledgeable about the society. Why? Because their job is to solve all the crimes that is happening. Someday, I would like to achieve my dream.


   Hello Sally! Wow! quite fast! Thank you for submitting your homework on time! I just made some few corrections here, I can see that you are really improving! Keep it up! However, just be always active in class okay? :)  I hope someday you will achieve all your dreams in life, just study hard okay? I know you will do great! :)  Take care Sally! Enjoy the weekend! :)

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Teacher Veronica!

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