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작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-06-04

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1) Do you play a musical instrument?

I play piano and recorder. Playing piano increases my mental ability because I have to really use my mind. It is also a relaxing activity as it improves my mood. Whenever I am sad, I just have to play piano which makes me calm and happy. It's quite difficult to play but it's fun when you learn it. Playing recorder is also fun especially when you master the basics of playing it. I sometimes play xylophone as well. If you can't play piano, play xylophone because it is easier and it's fun too. I can play ukelele too. Compared to other instruments, it is cheaper and portable. It is easy to pick up if you put time and effort learning it.


2) Have you ever been to the beach? Can you tell me about it?

I have been to the beach. I can't remember well all the things that happened because I was too young when we went there. I think I was with my friends Min-ji and Chae hyeon. We stayed in my friend's grandmother's house. It was a huge house. Her mom cooked delicious food for us.

Picture:

This picture takes place in the school playground. It is sports day that's why there are many people watching the games. They are enjoying and they are cheering the students. There are five students who are doing warm up and stretching to prepare themselves for the competition. Their coach, sitting on the bench, is watching and assisting them. There are four students who are racing on the track to the finish line. The boy won the game. Four cheerleaders are cheering for them on the side of the track. They are very joyful while cheering the four students. I can also see three boys on the top of the blocks. They are the runner ups of a game. The boy who raises his hands is the winner. He is very happy and the people around him. I think there is also a running race because I can see three boys who are running on the track.

Hello Julie! Please study the scripts above. The second one is short because it is based on your answer. We will work on it tomorrow. Keep practicing, Julie!

 

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