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Sang Hyup: [9.] No, This is because the most important thing is the meaning of birthday. The meaning of the birthday is to remember the thanks for parents not to show off.
Correct: No, This is because the most important thing is the meaning of the birthday. The meaning of the birthday is to remember?to give?thanks?and?parents should not show off.
Explanation: Do not forget to use the article "the" in your sentences because it determines what is being talk about in the sentence. Another thing is you should make your sentences clear in order to make it accurate and appropriate.

Sang Hyup: [10.] I am not married so I have no childs. however, if I have kids, I will give a book for them. There is a lot of wisedom in the books. Through the books, the childs can learn invaluable lessons.
Correct: I am not married so I have no?child. However, if I have kids, I will give a book for them. There?are a lot of wisdom in the books. Through the books,?a child can learn valuable lessons.
Explanation: The plural form of child is children so there is no such thing as childs. The always remember the use of capitalization in your sentences "Howver" is the first word in the sentence so it should be capitalized. Then you should use the plural form of the verb "are" in the sentence because you used the phrase "a lot" that means "many" so it should be in plural form. "Wisdom" is the correct spelling so please double check your spelling. And for the word "valuable" it means having qualities worthy of respect, admiration, or esteem so if we use the word invaluable that means it is the oppsite because the prefix "in-" means "not".

Sang Hyup: [11.] My sister and I give thanks to parent's during parents' birthdays. Also, we usually prepare some foods for parents.
Correct: My sister and I give thanks to our parents during their birthdays. We also usually prepare foods for them.
Explanation: Try to make your sentence simple to avoid repetition of words on it. Use pronouns like "their" or "them" instead for the noun parents.

Sang Hyup: [12.] I would be disappointed, but that's ok if she doesn't forget that I am always by her.
Correct: I would be disappointed, but that's ok if she doesn't forget that I am always?with her.
Explanation: It is more appropriate to use the preposition "with" because it signifies "you are with someone".

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Hello Sang Hyup! Thank you for submitting your homework early. I really appreciate it. You did good on it and just review some of my corrections so that next time you'll do better. I believe that you can! Keep it up! See you tomorrow. Bye. Take Care~

Teacher Carrie