* Avoid redundancy in your sentences and start being precise. Be direct to the point and state your message. You don't have to create 3 sentences with the same idea. Use commas and a conjunction to form a cohesion between the words.

* Use different kinds of vocabulary words in your sentences. We are also free to use verbs, nouns, articles, pronouns in our sentences so that we can convey our message clearer to the reader. Study how to use these and the proper arrangement too.

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