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작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-05-30

Can you give me the script?^-^

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1. The interview (1min 30secs per ques.)
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Can you tell me about 'Chuseok'?
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What is your favorite sport?

1. The interview
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What country do you want to travel?
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If you were a millionaire, what would you do?

1. The interview
>What is your favorite food?
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What can we do for our Earth?

-Corrections-
Practice this script:

*What is your favorite sport?

My favorite sport is badminton. Badminton courts are available in all community sport centers and in local schools. Even without courts or nets, you could still play badminton in parks or in your backyards if they are big enough. Another thing is that this is a game for all ages. You could start playing badminton from as young as you are able to swing a badminton racket, to as old as not being able to move around the court. Badminton requires running, jumping, and fast paced movement, this boosts flexibility and speed. It develops strength and power on the legs and arms. It can also help overweight people in burning fat and keeping the weight best for their age and height. In addition to the physical benefits, playing badminton improves mental health. It brings you fun and excitement. You could get addicted to it especially when you learn new tricks or techniques such as net shots, drop shots or jump smash. Even you lose some games, but the sense of enjoyment is something that other stuff cannot replace.

*What country do you want to travel?

I believe that there are many important aspects with traveling. I know that not everyone has this opportunity, but if I were given a chance, I would go to England with my mom. I would roam around London. London is a diverse and exciting city with some of the world's best sights and attractions like the London eye and Big Ben. Of course, we would eat at a restaurant with the best dishes and even the best street foods.

*If you were a millionaire, what would you do?

If I were a millionaire, I would want to spend the money for a good cause. I would donate to charities and help some poor family. I would also like to build a library where kids can read and learn a lot. I would put there many kinds of book so they would enjoy staying in the library. I would build a beautiful park for people to relax and enjoy. For myself and my family, I would like to buy a big mansion and I would be the princess.

*What is your favorite food?

My favorite foods are spaghetti and pizza. Spaghetti tastes really good and fills your stomach. You can twirl it around your fork and then you just slurp it all up. I like eating it especially with more bacon and cheese. But I think it is best to eat spaghetti with pizza. Everyone likes pizza. There are many kinds and you can put a lot of your favorite toppings on it. I like it with onions!

*What can we do for our Earth?

I believe that little things can make a big difference. Every time you turn off the water while you're brushing your teeth, you're doing something good. You are conserving water. Walking or riding a bike when going to work or school also helps. You can reduce greenhouse gases while burning some calories and improving your health. You can even help reduce pollution just by recycling. Planting trees is also good for the air and the land. There are more things that we can do to help save the Earth. If every person could take one small step toward being greener, the collective effort could be phenomenal.


Good evening, Julie! Below are some sentences to help improve your answers for the contest. I will just add more sentences when you suggest more ideas on Monday. But for now, try to memorize first the following paragraphs before I send you another set of script so you won't get confused. You can do it!:)

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