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Home work for my weekend plan~(Katrina)

작성자 : yej***   ·   2014-06-02

Hello Veronica teacher?
I'm Katrina!
I'm so sorry for my homework!
I'm late for homework.
But I'm write today.

I'm go to the wolak KOREN national park, and I'm camping for my Family.
I'm so funny for this camping.
But I'm sick, and I have a fever,
So I'm go to the hospital.
Doctor says "I don't know. But you have a fever! So you need a shot."
and My mom says "My daughter is very sick. so can you shot a ringer?"
and Doctor says "Okay. Wait please."
and I shot a ringer, and come back home.
and today's morning, I'm have a fever.
So My mom look for My body, and Mom says "You have a varicella."
and I says "Oh MY God!!! NO! NO!"
So I can't go to the school!
But tody My class is picnic!!!

BYBY~!!
Thank's~

답변

I went to wolak KOREN national park, and I camped out with my family.
I enjoyed our camping.
But I'm sick, and I have a fever,
So I went to the hospital.
My Doctor says "I don't know. But you have a fever! So you need a shot."
and My mom says "My daughter is very sick. so can you give her a ringer?"
and my Doctor says "Okay. Please wait."
and they injected me, And then after that I went home.
 But this morning, I still have fever.
So My mom checked me, and Mom says "You have a varicella."
and I said "Oh MY God!!! NO! NO!"
That's why I can't go to school!
Today, my classmates are having their picnic!!!

BYBY~!!
Thanks~

Hi Katrina! Thank you for submitting your Homework on time! I just made some few corrections. Good job! I can see some improvements, keep it up! Get well soon Katrina! I'll see you on Wednesday! Take care always!

Love,

Teacher Veronica :)

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