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작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-06-02

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Topic:

1. The interview
>What is your favorite Korean traditional story?
>What do you do when you are sad?

Correction:
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*What is your favorite Korean traditional story?

My favorite Korean traditional story is the tale of rabbit. The characters are the tiger, the man, the tree and the rabbit. The tiger was  stalking through the forest in search of something to eat when he fell into a deep pit, then a man helped him through a fallen tree. But the tiger was so hungry and he wanted to eat the man. The man pleaded not to eat him and begged the tiger to ask the tree and the ox about it but did not work. A rabbit came by and helped the man.

*What do you do when you are sad?

When I am sad, I usually read books and go out to play. I think reading books help me forget my problems for awhile once I get busy about it. It also gives me fun and some lesson that I could use to overcome a problem. Also, going out somewhere gives me happiness because I get to meet my friends. Friends really bring fun and excitement. Another way to cope up sadness is playing my favorite doll. She is nanny and I have her since I'm young. When I play her, I remember happy things about my childhood. I make funny faces, too. I do it to hide my sad face and to make the people around me that I'm okay.

Hello Julie! This are the ideas to guide you with your answer. Please memorize them then just add more if you still have additional ideas. Have a good night! You can do it!:)

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