Today I went to church with my dad and Christine. We walked for 10minutes. When we came to church, Christine and I went to a room to study. Math and Science. When it was 12:30, I had to go to my piano class. I was very tired but I also had to do my art class with my art teacher at home. I think today's class was a fun. I drew a monotype with paint and a dish washer. It was hard, but fun. I wish I can do monotype again with my art teacher. (~*^^*~)

Gloria: When came to church,
Correct: When we came to church,
Explanation: It is better to say it this way to complete your sentences.

Gloria: I wish I do monotype again with my art teacher. 
Correct: I wish I can do monotype again with my art teacher.
Explanation: It is better to add can because you're talking about the things that you want to do again.

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Hi Gloria ^^

Wow! I want to see your drawing :)
Good job for the Composition I just made  a few corrections .
have a great weekend ^^

Love,
Teacher Jasmine :)