Hi, Teacher! I'm Zenia. Today, I'll tell you about my family's birthdays. First, my birthday is May 25th. Next, my mom's birthday is August 24th. Then, my dad's birthday is March 13th. Lastly, my younger brother's birthday is December 28th. Bye-bye!

Zenia: Hi~ teacher.I'm Zenia.
Correct: Hi, Teacher! I'm Zenia.
Explanation: When saying "hi" and "hello" as a starter of the sentence, put a comma (,) after it, then the exclamation mark (!) should be at the end.

Zenia: Today, I'll tell you about my family's birthday.
Correct: Today, I'll tell you about my family's birthdays.
Explanation: No need to put comma (,) since "today" is not used as a conjunction in the sentence. Family is composed of many members, so better say "birthdays" than "birthday".

Zenia: Last, my younger brother's birthday is December 28th.
Correct:  Lastly, my younger brother's birthday is December 28th.
Explanation: When using "last" as literally the last one, it's better to use ''lastly" to make it more formal.

Zenia: Bye~Bye~
Correct: Bye-bye!
Explanation: This is the right way to write bye-bye in a paragraph form. It's good if it's in a formal way of writing.

** Hi, Zenia! It's good to know that you make your homework, and I like it. Continue studying hard and you'll do better everyday in our English class. See you on Thursday. Take care always!

~ Teacher Rachelle  ~