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My favorit sport

작성자 : ser***   ·   2014-05-27

My favorite sport is badminton.
Because badminton is good for your body.
We have to diet,and we have no stress.
But the big reason is I play with my dad.
It is good remembrance.

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 My favorite sport

My favorite sport is badminton.
Because badminton is good for your body.
We have to diet,and we have no stress.
But the big reason is I play with my dad.
It is good remembrance.

Sera: Because badminton is good for your body.
Correct: Badminton is good for our body.

Sera: We have to diet,and we have no stress.
Correct: We have to follow a diet plan and we will have no stress.

Sera: But the big reason is I play with my dad. It is good remembrance.
Correct: But playing with my dad is the reason why I like to play badminton and it's a good remembrance.

Good job, Sera!
Way to go!
You are very good in constructing sentences. Just be mindful of your spelling okay?

See you in class!

T. Melody~

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