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My bedroom

작성자 : CHA***   ·   2014-05-23

I will introduce my bedroom.
My bad is small.
The color pink is my bed .
My night table is a green color.
and,curtains is white.
Good night every one!

답변

I will introduce my bedroom.
My bed is small.
My bed is pink.
My night table is green and the curtain is white.
Good night every one!

* * * CORRECTIONS * * *

Bella: My bad is small.
Correct: My bed is small.



Bella: The color pink is my bed
Correct: My bed is pink.



Bella: My night table is a green color.
and,curtains is white.
Correct: My night table is green and the curtain is white.


* * * NOTE * * *

Hello, Bella!
Very cozy bedroom you got there.
Thank you for the description.
Minor corrections made :)



See you in class!
T. Melody~

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