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My hobby

작성자 : ser***   ·   2014-05-22

My hobby is hiking.
Mountain air is very good.
Hiking is hard.
But the end for hiking,
I feel really great.

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My hobby is hiking.
The fresh air from the mountain is very good.
Hiking is hard.
But in the end,
I feel really great.

* * * CORRECTIONS * * *

Sera: Mountain air is very good.
Correct: The fresh air from the mountain is very good.

Sera: But the end for hiking, I feel really great.
Correct: But in the end, I feel really great.

* * * NOTE * * *

Hello Sera!
Good job on your homework!


You did great. Teacher just made minor corrections.


See you in class!
T. Melody~

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