There are 4 policemen at the police station. They are not good at work, and they also make friends. I like this drama because, there are many popular people are acting to this drama~!^^

Emily:There are 4 police on the police office.
Correct:There are 4 policemen at the police station.
Explanation:When talking about a lot of ''policemen", better use this word to emphasize what you're trying to say and take note of the preposition "at" which talks about place. Instead of "office", it's called "station".

Emily:They are not good at work, and they also making friendship.
Correct:They are not good at work, and they also make friends.
Explanation:"Make friends" are the right words to say if talking about "befriending to someone".

Emily:I like this drama because, there are many populr people is acting this drama~!^^
Correct:I like this drama because, there are many popular people are acting to this drama~!^^
Explanation:No need to put comma (,) after the conjunction "because". Comma (,) is used to separate 2 clauses or phrases. Be careful with the spelling of "popular". Since you're talking about "people", use "are" as verb after it.

** Thank you, Emily! I appreciate your composition. Though I didn't ask you to write something, you still did it. I'll see you tomorrow again. Take care always.

~ Teacher Rachelle  ~