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작성자 : joj***   ·   2014-05-21

Today I was drinking water.And I accidently broked the glass cup. I hurt my foot.And a lot of blood came out .I was to scared and I'am glad the glass don't go to my foot.

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Today I drank water and, I accidently broke the glass. I hurt my foot and a lot of blood came out. I was too scared but I am glad that the glass didn't get into my foot.

Wanda: Today I was drinking water.
Correct: Today I drank water
Explanation: It is better to say drank because you used the word today.

Wanda: And I accidently broked the glass cup.
Correct: and, I accidently broke the glass.
Explanation: Every time that you will use the word and always put a comma, because and is use for connecting two words. There's no such word as "broked" broke is the past tense of break and Broken is the past participle. It's also better to say glass to avoid redundancy.

Wanda: I was to scared and I'am glad the glass don't go to my foot.
Correct: I was too scared but I am glad that the glass didn't get into my foot.
Explanation: When you use the word I am no need to put an apostrophe next to letter I and am. Also, be careful with the spelling of to and too as it omits different meaning. instead of saying and I changed your linking word to but .

Hi Wanda :)

I hope you're feeling better now :)
Always take good care! Alright????

Love
Teacher Jas

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